Reduce Plastic Waste Scheme 2020
Dear Customer and Suppliers
Stanley Organics Ltd has come up with a new scheme to help reduce our use of plastic packing, our team would like to stop dumping plastic into the landfill. This is because the plastic bags are biodegradable which makes it so the bags take a long time to break down under certain conditions which aren't great long term solutions. A member of a team has helped us with this scheme and has written some brief notes about it.
Here are somethings that we wish to change:
* All plastic bags are to be replaced with hessian bags which are made flax and hemp fibers, first bag free with purchases over $50 or we will provide recycled cardboard boxes and will also help carry them to your car.
* Most liquid products (liquid soap, shampoo, dishwashing liquid, etc) now available in 'fill your own' containers. bringing your containers to fill will get you a 5% discount.
* Fresh vegetables - instead of plastic bags, try re-useable waxed cotton bags to keep food fresh.
We thank you for taking the time to read our new scheme, we would like to hear any feedback about how we could improve this to make the community a better place.
Kind regards
Judith and Barry Sampson
Store Owners.
123 Green Road 07 444 4444
Newton Stanleyorganicsltd@email.com.nz
Kia ora K-Ci
ReplyDeleteThe format of this is perfect! Well done! I like the banner you've created as well.
Because this is an external correspondence, we need to edit thoroughly for mistakes. Several times you use a comma where you should use a full stop. Also have another look and make sure you are using capital letters in the right places (for example, 'Green road' should be 'Green Road').
Try running your work through Grammarly.com and the Chrome Extension Read & Write.
Ka rawe -- very focused work on this :)