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Monday, 1 May 2017

In the holidays i had to do chores then i went out to chill with my mates and went to Zacs Birthday and we went to timezone for his birthday.Then we went back to Zacs house and started playing on his PS4 and shooting his AK-47 BB gun at people.But then Zac had to go and hang with his family for the rest of his birthday

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous1 May 2017 at 10:13

    I think this is a good piece of writing. You could work on your punctuation and putting capital I's.

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  2. Anonymous3 May 2017 at 11:13

    yes you should work on your punctuation, but everything else is good

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